Ideas she was a little girl and unusual because she ate pot plants and lampshades.
Organised I wanted to read more when she was in the hospital.
Voice how there was exclamation marks and long words.
Word choice the author used tier 3 words and not words that I don`t know.
Sentence fluency there were words that were written in bold and used a lot of exclamation marks for yelling.
Conversation the paragraphs made it easier to read.